Blog #5 Brendan Mclaughlin

This week we went over the essays in class and had them peer edited. I chose to compare Battle Royal to The Lottery because they both show similar themes like fear, excitement and pain caused to the main character. After peer edit i became aware that i needed to add more detail and put in quotes to convey my thoughts more strongly to the reader. I will put this quotes in for the final draft and I will also put in page number and last name for MLA formatting.